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Discussion in 'Showcase' started by BeIntelligent, Jul 23, 2012.
Collab with two people from another forum
In my opinion it's too dark. I like the effects and stuff, but there could be a better background and foreground.
I genuinely like it to be honest. I like the pop of color it has, but i feel like you should add something in front of the yellow, just to break it up a bit
also, i feel like you could of choosen a better focal.
Btw, i have a couple of ideas for this tag, would you mind if i asked you if i could collab on it?
The focal is too tall for the style. You've seen it enough mang, it works bests with smaller focal that can properly "float" in the atmosphere of the tag, plus it's missing enough of a color pop.
Fresh as hell, maybe sharpen the dude a bit more but saying anything else is wrong with it is just being picky
nice but not nice.
to be honest, i can never honestly give my opinion on works like these.
why? because there are so many styles incorporated, that the finished product usually always looks way different than WIPS.
and this is definitely a wip.