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Discussion in 'Showcase' started by Ouaran, Jun 30, 2012.
Hey, looking to get alot better at this, so any tips will be appreciated
Thanks for sharing this. I prefer #2 to #1 despite Kirby's cuteness.
#1 is too bright for elements to be visible and the font does not fit.
#2 has nice depth and the border suits the style.
Both do need more of a focal since the effects are not really controlled.
Keep it up.
Work on quality and effects.
The effects in both are pretty overwhelming and don't go good with the atmo and render.
I can see the blurs in your tags, and they don't look good.
Never use borders in tags.
Try to make your focal stand out more from the background and effects.
The first one was really cute, but the text didn't blend in. Get rid of that, or make it blend in in a better way.
Other than that, good job!